成考專升本英語作文寫作要點分析(1)

　　第一部分 寫作授課要點

　　短文寫作總分20分。短文寫作部分要求考生寫出一篇80字左右的短文。題材以記敘文為主，試卷可能給出題目或規(guī)定情景或段首句。

　　短文寫作的要求為：能夠正確表達思想，意義連貫，無重大語言錯誤。

　　寫作內容涉及生活，一般常識和私人信件。

　　短文寫作中的題目我們也可以稱作命題寫作。

　　情景寫作也就是便條寫作。

　　段首句式的寫作可以稱為主題句式的寫作。

　　一、英語寫作訓練的要點

　　英語寫作最重要的一點是用英語思維進行寫作。

　　通?。毫晳T于先把作文翻譯成漢語，然后逐字翻譯成英語。

　　在理解和使用英語詞匯時，要注意英語和漢語在意義上的不同。

　　中文：我得努力學習，要不我就要落后了。

　　錯譯：I should study hard， otherwise I would be backward.

　　正譯：I should study hard， otherwise I would lag behind.

　　說明：“backward”是形容詞，意為落后的，向后的或緩慢的，(表示性質);“l(fā)ag behind”是動詞詞組，意為落后，落在后面(表示動作或行為)。

　　中文：你不要學我樣，你身體沒有我好。(指：情況不一樣。)

　　錯譯：Never learn from me，since you are not so strong as I am.

　　正譯：Don't follow my example， since you are not so strong as I am.

　　說明：“Learn from sb.”指“向某人學習”，并不是“照我一樣做”的意思。

　　中文：由于時間關系，我就到此為止。

　　錯譯：Due to the time， I should stop here.

　　正譯：As time is up (or： limited)， I am afraid I have to stop here.

　　說明：“due to…”是“由于……之故”而導致某種結果的意思，本句用due to 不合邏輯。

　　accept和receive， permit和promise， call one's name和call one by name.

　　accept 收到(接受)

　　receive 收到(不一定接受)

　　permit 允許別人做某事

　　promise 允許為別人做某事

　　call one's name 罵某人

　　call one by name 叫某人的姓名

　　所以我們在從事英語寫作訓練的時候：

　　1.要明確英語寫作的意義。

　　2.要學習和掌握必要的寫作理論。

　　3.要通過大量的閱讀，新概念第二冊比較適合。

　　二、如何限題和寫提綱

　　定題：選擇恰當的題目。

　　命題：“Teaching”

　　過于籠統(tǒng)：Teaching

　　仍較廣泛：Teaching Number Concept

　　范圍縮?。篢eaching Number Concept to Children

　　范圍明確：Teaching Number Concept to Children at Five

　　命題“Child Behaviour”

　　過于籠統(tǒng)：Child Behaviour

　　仍較廣泛：How Children Play Together

　　范圍縮?。篐ow Girls Play Together

　　范圍明確：Patterns of Play Among Primary School Girl Students

　　寫提綱的好處：1. 可以擴大思路

　　2. 可以按次序排好素材

　　3. 將文章分成段

　　4. 明確寫作的中心思想

　　“The Advantages of Travel (旅行的益處。)”

　　根據這一題目，在構思時可能會想到以下內容：

　　1.seeing strange and different things (看到各種奇異的東西)

　　2.meeting people with different interests (遇到有各種不同興趣的人)

　　3.keeping us fit and healthy (有助于身體健康)

　　4.enjoying beautiful scenery (欣賞各地美景)

　　5.understanding how people live (了解人們怎樣生活)

　　6.visiting famous cities and scenic spots (瀏覽名城和名勝)

　　7.tasting different foods and local flavours (品嘗各地風味)

　　8.getting ideas of the conditions and customs of other people (了解各地風土人情)

　　9.arousing the fervent love for our motherland (激起對祖國的熱愛)

　　10.gaining knowledge of geography and history (獲得地理歷史知識)

　　11.making one less narrow minded (使人心胸開闊)

　　12.gaining other knowledge (獲得其他方面知識)

　　13.seeing places read of in books (目睹曾在書上讀到過的地方)

　　I. enjoy places of interest

　　a. enjoy beautiful scenery in different places (4)

　　b. see places read of in books (13)

　　c. visit famous cities and scenic spots (6)

　　II. know people and their customs

　　a.meet people with different interest (2)

　　b.see strange and different things (1)

　　c.get ideas of the conditions and customs of other people (8)

　　d.taste different foods and local flavours (7)

　　e.understand how people live in different ways (5)

　　III. benefit us both mentally and physically

　　a.gain knowledge of geography and history (10)

　　b.gain other knowledge (12)

　　c.arouse the fervent love for our motherland (9)

　　d.keep us healthy (3)

　　e.make one less narrow minded (11)

　　The Advantages of Travel

　　Travel is beneficial to us in at least three ways.

　　First， by traveling we can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places. We will see with our own eyes many places read of in books， and visit some famous cities and scenic spots.

　　Second， we will meet people with different interests and see strange and different things when we travel. We can get ideas of the conditions and customs of other people， taste different foods and local flavours if we like. In this way， we can understand how differently other people live.

　　Third， travel will not only help us to gain knowledge of geography and history and other knowledge， which arouses the fervent love for our motherland， but will also help us keep healthy and make us less narrow-minded. Travel does benefit us both mentally and physically.

　　With all these advantages of travel， it is no wonder that travel has now become more popular than ever in China.

　　在寫100字左右的作文，我們也強調三段論。第一句話或第一段我們強調我們要寫的內容，第二段找一些例子闡述一下。第三段再次把我們強調的內容引申的說一下。

　　三、文章的三個部分

　　引言 introduction

　　正文 body

　　結束語 conclusion

　　引言 introduction

　　1. When you are waiting in front of a theatre or at the train terminals， you will realize how important punctuality is. Punctuality is really a virtue， especially in a busy city like Shanghai. Perhaps if everybody were punctual， there would be less suffering and sorrow.

　　正文 body

　　2. Punctuality is the main constituent of good character. A person， who is always in time for his appointment， shows real consideration for others. On the other hand， a person who is always late shows his selfishness and thoughtlessness and he is not worthy to be friend with.

　　constituent 構成

　　selfishness 自私

　　3. Some people often say that they cannot always be punctual since traffic is so heavy these days. I think traffic congestion cannot be an excuse for being late. As everybody knows that we might meet an unexpected congestion on the roads， we should leave a bit earlier for the appointment to ensure that we would not be late.

　　traffic congestion 交通堵塞

　　4. Some people always have a lot of excuses for coming late. When they finally arrive， they keep on saying sorry to their friends and then explain. The excuse is not always traffic congestion， sometimes they complain that they have met a friend on the road or have helped a blind man to cross the road. Some also like to blame their watches， the clocks at home or in the office. To such people， we cannot help but say sorry that we have come too early.

　　keep on doing sth. 一直做某事

　　5. Yet after all such smart fellows will soon find that gradually their friends become fewer and fewer. Perhaps at that time， they would realize how important punctuality is.

　　結束語 conclusion

　　6. To be or not to be punctual is a habit. So when we are young， we should try to be punctual every time and never be late for it is much more easily acquired in youth than when we are older.

　　The person I shall never forget

　　The person I shall never forget is Qingfengxiang. She is the best friend in my life.

　　She often listens to me when my mood is bad. Moreover， she usually gives me some advices if I need help. Sometimes， she lends money to me if I want to buy some new clothes.

　　I will never forget her help even though I already left Wuhan city. I think that she will be one of the most important person during my life. I hope that the friendship of us will keep forever.

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　　I will never forget her help even though I have already left Wuhan city. I think that she will be one of the most important persons in my life. I hope that the friendship of us will keep forever.

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　　She often listens to me when I'm in a bad mood. Moreover， she usually gives me some advices if I need help. Sometimes， she lends money to me if I want to buy some new clothes.

　　Why We Learn English

　　English is an international language now. Everyone needs to know English.

　　When we will visit a great number of different places in the word， we need to talk about local person with English. We are interesting in books， otherwise nowadays many of the valuable books are written in English or translated into English. We in order to go through ones， so we should have a good command of English.

　　We should try our best to learn the English language well.

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　　When we visit a great number of different places in the world， we need to talk about a local person in English. Nowadays many of the valuable books are written in English or translated into English， so if we are interested in books， we should have a good command of English.

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　　We should try our best to learn English well.

　　專升本英語作文考試中，語法一定要簡明扼要，而且要正確。

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